In this comic: Gerbera wants a flower post readers can understand at a glance; Kiku wants its evidence preserved. They keep the copy to one line without making the three verified sources disappear.
Four-panel comic
Everyday Life at the Flower Calendar Room #3: One Line, Three Sources
· Comic 3
One line isquick to read.Where is
the source?It was a
roundup article.Then it is
not ready yet.Three sources
are verified.Can the copy
stay one line?One line
of copy!Three source
lines. Approved.
This line is
quick to read. Where is
the source? ...It was a
roundup article. Then it is
not ready yet. I verified
three sources. Can the copy
still fit on one line? One line
of copy! Three source
lines. Approved.
quick to read. Where is
the source? ...It was a
roundup article. Then it is
not ready yet. I verified
three sources. Can the copy
still fit on one line? One line
of copy! Three source
lines. Approved.
This line is
quick to read. Where is
the source?
quick to read. Where is
the source?
...It was a
roundup article. Then it is
not ready yet.
roundup article. Then it is
not ready yet.
I verified
three sources. Can the copy
still fit on one line?
three sources. Can the copy
still fit on one line?
One line
of copy! Three source
lines. Approved.
of copy! Three source
lines. Approved.
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